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Distorted Persuasion : Relationship Poetry

written by Poet : zochit2me


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Distorted Persuasion


our love was-shaped

like the rhythm of wind

wild and carefree


unleashed music

…bluesy kind of feel


the sky bleeds now

leaving an imprint

in distance we put

between memories


my voice seems broken,

hidden in a time-line

of confused circles


echoes emerge, bouncing

from the same ole' same ole'

…a hollow kind of sound


too much space makes

me uncomfortable

living in blinks of second

thoughts


beneath smooth,

lies thousands upon thousands

of rough drafts containing

… I'm sorry


written at leisure between

make up sex and cuddle time,

while smoking cigarettes

…shaping [us] back into [whole]


watching love burn holes

in both of our dreams

knowing the real attraction

was to our distorted persuasion

of lust for each other


~Becky Zoch~4/10/08

Originally Posted On Site: 2008-04-11 11:34:39
Last Login: 05.29.08


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