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Soup : Other Poetry

written by Poet : Angella McCormack


Starting with an idea, a wishful thought

of something magical to create.

Full of wholesome goodness, of everything you need.

I begin with crystal clear water and into add,

some love, understanding, responsibility and caring.

I will tinge up the flavour, a little spice of life,

would be nice.

Over the heat you twist and churn, being careful not to burn.

Boil and bubble , we could be heading for trouble.

Straying from the recipe, that is written specifically

for what is good for me.

ignoring the notes, and adding others totes

confusion sets in, thing's begin 

to merge, to unfamiliarity.

The thick murky soup, takes on a sludge look.

Its nothing like it looks in the book.



Originally Posted On Site: 2010-02-17 17:25:59
Last Login: 07.11.10


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