Italic Rose Petals So Soft : Love Poetry

Such a beautiful scribe that says so much and paints a picture of feelings and closeness between two who are in such a wonderful and deep love.

Love poetry by far rocks more then any other!

Love the pic that was added!! Excellent!! You should send mail to others and let them know how you did it.

if I could offer anything here - smell of -turq ?being a freakish alchemist who is a nose and does know the codes to scents and I does design and mix perfume i think u should perhaps invest in a few essential oil books- I really think it would help you get the sense of smell I would also if you want to write of the oils suggest u know them- it really helps - knowing them to describe them.--trq roses and to be honest I didn;t understand what was italic- and where do the angels fit in here? while its pretty, it needs some reason for the reason- you lost me telling your story and I am only picking cause i think u have talent are young and could and did improve on this poem- vast improvements in one weeks time!

you may want to look up the term purple prose-to use purple prose terms- to be this descriptive- I lub it but in the real world- u would get in trouble 4 it in judging by masters- I think u have great material here and it is awesome for a first draft off your cuff the pictures magnificant!