Making Every Head Count : Inspirational Poetry Writing by a Poet out of New York New South Wales

written by Poet : Paul McCann

Some fought a war they can never forget .
They have suffered too much .

I have prayed for those who cannot walk
without the aid of a crutch .

Heaven give strength to the weak .

Bring them to a place where they can rest.

They have proved themselves in the fire .
Their metal was put to the test .

Some have received their just reward.
They have fought for what they believed .

Making a head count .

Its hard but in the end it must be concieved

How many lost .
How many wounded .
How many come home today .

Some are ready to fight again
Gog bless those who stand in harms way.

War Poems

By Paul McCann

Originally Posted On Site: 2008-05-25 04:39:18
Last Login: 05.24.12

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Comments:

	Thanks for Caring The points in your piece were well made although I thought the piece ran away from you in a few spots. I personally beleive that if you go back over it and tighten it up a bit it would read much smoother.	2008-05-25 01:00:00 Poet ErgoIgo

	Thanks For Sharing Hi , Nice to have some constructive input about this poem . I havce re-written the piece and hope the message transposes in a fluent delivery . Respectfully yours Paul	2008-05-27 01:00:00 Poet Paul

	Improved flow Paul, I am impressed that you would receive and accept my recommendations. This piece reads much smoother now. Have you had a chance to sample any of my submissions?	2008-05-27 01:00:00 Poet ErgoIgo

	Bard of strength . Yes I have been reading your work and enjoy your style of writing . I will send you my thoughts .	2008-05-27 01:00:00 Poet Paul


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