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Love In Vain : Formal Poetry

written by Poet : Paul McCann


 

 

Mirror Loop

This is a style I created myself.


The structure of this poem is written so that the poem can be read from the beginning to end and then back again from it's end to the beginning.


The poem can be of any theme, but must have proper meter.

 

 Love In Vain

By Paul McCann

 

 

 

Mercy , no .

Hands and feet had nails driven deep.

Body numbed and succumbed

Side speared.

Blood lost .

Christ cried out

Father forgive

Jesus had died

Lips were sealed

Glory that God had revealed.

Christ glorified .

 

 

Glorified Christ .

Revealed had God that Glory .

Sealed were lips.

Died had Jesus .

Forgive Father out cried Christ .

Lost blood .

Speared side .

Succumbed and numbed body .

Deep driven nails had feet and hands .

No mercy .

 

 

 

 

Originally Posted On Site: 2008-02-21 00:51:33
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