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Jenny And The Emperors Garden : Creative Writing

written by Poet : Paul McCann


Jenny was a very quiet girl , different to other girls in primary school . The difference was her talent in creative writing and artwork . This gift she had was both appreciated and envied by her teachers and peers .

Jenny was often on the outside of social groups and found it a struggle to make and keep friends . She was a deep thinker and avoided things like

sports activities and playground bantering . She would always stand on the outskirts of groups observing instead of participating . The only way she could express herself was through her artwork and writing .

Her weekends were spent at home with her parents . She liked to help with jobs around the house . There was always plenty to be done and her Mum and Dad appreciated everything she did . Even though her parents were so glad of Jenny's help they became concerned that she wasn't making friends and her constant desire to write and paint pictures at home .

One Friday evening at dinner her Dad said to Jenny ,

 

"I was just thinking about taking up walking on Saturday mornings . So I thought I'd invite you to come along Jenny . What do you think ?"

 

Jenny smiled and took a while to answer ,

 

"    Walking . That might be  a good idea I could see lots of things that might inspire me to write or draw something ."

 

Her Dad seemed a little enthused and replied ,

"Ok then . I'll call you about say seven in the morning ok ?"

 

"Sure Dad . "
She said .

After dinner Jenny helped washing up the dishes before going upstairs to her bedroom . She pulled the curtains closed and got changed . Opening up her wardrobe she selected her hardly ever worn pink designer tracksuit and her  silver and gold super comfortable hi-tech running shoes in readiness for the next day . Then she set her alarm and jumped into bed .

She had a restless sleep thinking about this new activity on Saturday morning and as morning came she slowly got out of bed . Jenny got dressed and opened up the curtains in her bedroom and welcomed the new day .

She took a deep breath and looked up at the sky . 

 

Heavens window opened up briefly as God bathed the earth with light sun showers . A rainbow rested on a distant field as the sun shone from behind a cluster of black clouds that were gilded with golden fringes on the edge .

Jenny tried capture the scene with a quick sketch on a sketch pad . Her inspired work was interrupted by a knock on her bedroom door .

 

"Jenny are you ready for our walk ?"

Said her Dad .

 

Jenny put away her sketch and said .

"Ok I'm coming .Hang on a second ."

 

When she came out of the bedroom her Dad was running on the spot on the upstairs landing . He stopped and reached out for the banister and said ,

 

"Let's begin a warm up . I'll give you a demo Jenny ."

 

He got on all fours like a cat and arched up his back . Jenny tried to follow but kind of lost her balance and rolled over on her side .

 

"That's ok Jenny . Stay there . Now roll over on your back and we'll do a few leg lifts . Ten on each foot should do ."

 

He said . Not long after that they were ready to tackle the world outside .

They walked out the door and made their way along the sidewalk at a brisk pace . Along the way a few early morning joggers passed and said hello .

A block or two had been tread and her Dad noticed that Jenny began to slow down a little and gasp for her breath .

  

 

" Keep up Jenny ."

He said .

 

"Daddy don't walk so fast ."

She replied .

 

Her Dad slowed down and pulled up to a stop .

Jenny almost was bent over and breathed heavily .

 

"we need to do this more often Jenny to get you fit ."

Her Dad said .

 

Jenny almost laughed between her deep breaths and said ,

"Sure .. just.. a moment . I can't.."

 

" Are you not able to continue .."

Her Dad asked .

 

"In a minute…I just need "

She replied with her hands behind her head .

 

"Sorry Jenny I forgot you're not used to this kind of exercise . I used to walk three miles a day before you were born .'

He said .

 

"I've got a pain in my side Dad ."

 

"That's a stitch Jenny ."

Came the reply .

 

"What's a stitch ?"

She asked .

 

"It just means you're not used to walking fast ."

He said .

 

"Will I always have a stitch ?"
She asked .

 

"Don't be silly Jenny . Listen I'll go on ahead and you can go back home . I'll see you when I get back ."

He replied .

 

"Thanks Dad . Have a nice walk ."

She said .

 

Jenny watched her Dad turn on his foot and high tail it along the sidewalk like a man on a mission . Around the corner he disappeared . Then Jenny turned around and started to make her way back home .

 

When the stitch left she skipped over the cracks on the pavement and started to sing a little tune she made up . The birds in the trees seemed to join in as well  .The chorus of life echoed everywhere with a song of life , love and possibilities . Bees buzzed among the flowers . Dogs barked at stray cats on the prowl . Babies cried behind closed doors and the sound of children's laughter filtered through the air .  Along this side walk of life Jenny went until

She spotted a few bright blown up balloons tied to a string that hung from a fence and danced on the morning breeze . On the ground at the front  gate where the balloons were was a huge sign that said .

 

Garage Sale Today

 

 Jenny had a look in as she walked past and it looked so intriguing that she decided it was worth further investigation .She walked up the path and into

the garage . There were many items on display .

"Take as long as you need sweetheart ."

Said an old man sitting in there in chair .

 

"Oh hello  ."

Said Jenny .

 

"You're up very early today ."

  Said the old man with the long grey beard .

 

"I was walking with my Dad . He wants to get me fit ."

 

"That's a good idea ."

The old man said .

 

Jenny was pulling through some items on a table

" I suppose so .mmm . How much is this ."

 

"What have yo there . Let me see ."

He stood up and looked over as Jenny held up some brushes and a paint set .

 

"You can have it darling for free ."

He said .

 

"Oh are you sure ?"

She asked .

 

"I've always liked to think I could encourage artists . Please use the paints and brushes . They very special . You'll see . "

 

Jenny continued to pull things out of baskets and boxes . She held up a coloured disc shaped stone and said .

 

"Could you please tell me sir what this might be ?"

 

'It's a hopscotch stone . If you like it please take it . There are some instructions of how to play the game .If you press down on the top of the disc it will open a secret compartment, read the instructions and enjoy the game . "

 

Jenny continued to look through things on display .


"Let me put those things you have into a bag . little one ."

 

Said the old man who went over with a backpack and placed all the items inside . An old tin box fell out of the backpack on to the floor and a gold key fell out as the lid came off the tin box . Jenny lifted the key and handed it back

to the old man .

 

"Congratulations my dear . You have been selected to go to the emperors garden . "

The old man said .

 

"What .?"

Jenny said .

 

"You have been chosen my dear . Don't question just follow your feelings to what awaits . In the backpack here you have everything you will need for the  journey . Trust your innocence my child and experience a magical land that's awaits you beyond the doorway ."

 

He pointed to a door in the corner of the garage .

 

Jenny was entranced that she almost floated to the door .

She placed the golden key into the lock and the door opened .

She looked back to say goodbye but the old man was gone .

 

The door closed behind her and on the other side she discovered a beautiful garden with hedged pathways and water fountains . Right around the edge of the garden was a high wall . Some statues of winged creatures lined a pathway to a gate in the wall .

Suddenly a large bird flew down from a tree and landed on Jenny's shoulder and walked along her arm . Jenny lifted her arm and looked at the bird . It was similar to a peacock but without colour on its tail .'

 

"Can you paint my tail ?"
Said the bird .

 

"Amazing . You can talk ?

Jenny replied .

 

"Yes I do and so do you . Now will you please paint colours on my tail ?"

The bird said .

 

 

"Just be patient ."

Jenny said . Suddenly she remembered about the paints and brushes she had been given by the old man in the garage sale . Then she opened up the bag and was soon busy working away , swishing her brushes back and forth along the birds tail feathers . When she had finished the bird was so proud of its tail . Each feather had a different colour . The bird lifted its tail and began to sing the most beautiful song .

A pony jumped over the high wall  and landed at Jenny's feet .

 

The bird thanked Jenny flew into the air .

The pony said ,

 

"Hey , what colour's . What brush strokes . Could you paint my tail too .?"

 

"Why sure little pony ."

 

Jenny began to paint the ponies tail with every colour she had . It looked like a rainbow when it was finished . The pony knelt before Jenny and asked her to climb on to its back . Jenny gave a scream of delight when the pony galloped off and jumped over the high wall . On the other side of the garden wall fruit  trees stood with their braches weighed down with every kind of fruit imaginable .

 

"Help yourself ."

Said the pony as it took Jenny all around the orchard .

Jenny plucked a pear and shared it with the bear who lived there in the tree ,  then the three ate some plums and nuts before a large white swan came gliding down to the ground where they stood .

 

"The Emperor would like to see you now ."

Said the swan .

 

"Who . Me ?"

Jenny asked .

 

"Yes right away so climb on my back .

 

Jenny did as she was told and the white swan flew over a lake that stretched out to a small island that held a Temple cradled within its boundaries .

 

"Who lives in there ?

Jenny asked .

 

" That is where the Emperor lives ."

The Swan replied .

 

"Can I visit him ?"

She asked .

 

"Of course . Can you play hopscotch ?"
Said the Swan .

 

Jenny remember she had been given instructions and a disc and as the swan landed outside the Temple she opened up her bag and read the instructions of how to play hopscotch .

 

The swan flapped its huge wings and flew away into the sky .

Jenny waved and the Swan retuned and said ,

 

"To make the Temple door open you must play the game on the path . The Temple door will open when the final number is thrown ."

 

The path was coloured stepping stones with a number on each of them . Jenny pressed the top of the stone and instructions for hopscotch were revealed . The message said ,

 

Start at the beginning and throw you're age then hop to that stone without taking a breath . Next subtract two and hop to that number without taking a breath . Now throw an even number and subtract 3 then hop to that number . Each time you throw you must not breath while you are hopping . To reach the end of the path you must throw at least three even numbers before the door will open . Good luck .

 

When the disc in her hand she started to play as directed .

Eventually Jenny completed the game the temple door opened .

Inside was a garden was another temple .

Jenny made her way in through another door where beautiful flowers draped out from window boxes on ledges that sat around the perimeters of the temple walls . She saw a staircase that wound itself upwards from the garden to another door with two statues of lions placed outside .

Jenny made her way up the staircase and as she approached the huge doorway the two lions came to life .

 

"Have you painted a birds tail ?"

Said  one of the lions .

 

"Yes I did "

Jenny answered .

 

The other lion asked ,

"Have you painted a ponies tail ?

 

"Why yes, I have ."

Came the reply .

 

The lions fired more questions at her ..

 

"Did you share a pear with a bear ?"

 

 "Yes "

 

"And ride a white swan ?"

 

"Yes ."

 

"And play hopscotch all the way without stopping for a breath ."

 

"Yes"

 

"Did you walk through the emperors garden ?

 "Yes ."

 

"The you may pass and enter through the door to see the emperor .

 

Said the lions .

 

The double doors opened up and Jenny walked inside .

The old man sat in the corner on a chair in the garage .

 

"Hello my precious one . Did you enjoy my garden ?"

He asked .

 

"I saw so many things . "

She said .

 

" Well then you must come back again another day . I will have another garage sale very soon . Keep your eyes open the next time you are out for an early morning walk ."

 

"Thank you for letting me see your garden . So you must be the Emperor ?

 

"Yes , can I have my key back please ?"

The old man said .

Jenny handed back the key and the backpack .

 

"Please keep the brushes and paints . They are for you top paint a picture of all you have seen in my garden today ."

He said .

 

Jenny walked out of the garage and into the street where she met her Dad on his way back home .

 

"Jenny aren't you home yet ?"

 

"Not yet Dad ."

She replied .

 

"What on earth have you been doing ?"

He said .

 

"Well Dad . Actually I don't know if was on earth . '

Jenny replied .

 

'Where did you get that backpack ?"

Her Dad asked .

 

"From the Emperor ."

 "From who ?"

Her Dad asked .

 

"From the old man who had a garage sale in there . He gave it to me ."

Jenny said pointing to the house that she had just come from but all that was there was an empty block of land .

 

"Jenny sometimes I think you're living in another world ".

Her Dad said .

 

"Well maybe I am Dad , can I race you home ."

They both ran all the way along the sidewalk until they reached their front door .  When the weekend was over Jenny finished the picture of the Emperors Garden  . The canvas was placed in her room along with some of her other wonderful paintings .

 

THE END

By Paul Mc Cann

 

Originally Posted On Site: 2007-09-27 06:59:45
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