In-Tense (Paul McCann)
This is an original structure I created which moves from past tense to present tense and back to past tense in the storyline or theme .
My Example
I Can't Have What I Had
By Paul McCann
I had drugs .
I had pubs.
I had girls on call .
I had fought .
I had thought ,
I had done it all.
I had burned .
I had turned .
I had to atone .
I was gone .
I was wrong .
I was on my own .
I had lost all I had then I got it back .
I have faith
I am safe .
I have earned respect .
I have fun .
I have won .
I have worked it out .
I have found .
I am bound .
I have no more doubt .
I am glad .
I have had all other things added.
I have found my life when I lost all I had .
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