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Escape From The Sad Heart : Sad Poetry

written by Poet : Paul McCann


 

 

The Sonnet

 

 

This structure is a fourteen line piece
with a specific rhyming pattern and meter.
The rule is to keep to a set of alternate
and/or iambic pentameter variations.
A good example of this is breaking up the stanza into an 8 - 6 verse style,
and then forming a structure as a songwriter would with a basic AABA method , i.e. Verse Verse Chorus Verse.
Using this principle the sonnet may follow a rhyming pattern such as ABBAABBA for the first 8 lines and then CDECDE and GG which permits the 14 line sonnet to be broken into 3 groups of 4 and 1 final group of 2 rhyming lines to finish

My Example
 

 

Sad heart please disguise
For I cannot hide
how I feel inside
Tears behind my eyes
My sad hearts capsized
Shipwrecked by the tide.
My thoughts start to slide
Into a sunrise
Its there I escape
Like a bird in flight
There I feel the shape
of ships in the night
On a lost landscape
far away from sight .


By Paul McCann

Originally Posted On Site: 2010-07-16 21:35:22
Last Login: 02.09.12


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