Running For Your Life : Sports Poetry Writing by a Poet out of Montreal

written by Poet : Shelly Wiseberg

The start of beating hearts

racing to the finish line

of a winner's run of great victory

in accomplishment.

Going at your own pace

without losing your breath

grasping for air in taking it slow

and enjoying life's marathon.

Through thick and thin

you can test yourself on what

you are capable of doing

in unexpected situations

never knowing on how you

are going to react next.

You have to be ready for anything

that comes your way.

Do the best you can

despite the competition

keeping your goals in mind.

Written By Shelly Wiseberg

Originally Posted On Site: 2007-05-14 12:26:02
Last Login: 07.16.08

Visits as of 12-12-07: 160

Comments:

	I like the poem But I think it could have more running and less stops. When read this poem sounds to have broken sentences and loses its message and flow. In the sport you chose this becomes very critical and the reader should be chasing after the words as they read. If read aloud I believe you can easily pick it up. Thats how I test alot of my work. For some reason the ears can just hone in on it. As far as your dedication and jumping on the subject matter I have got to applaud you. You have woven yourself into your work and with time your subscribers will indeed be endless.	2007-05-14 00:00:00 Poet Jeff

	i understood it ;- } i think what the above writer means is in the machine ride we have to cross out some the and such too low of concentration levels its a fast food society for some but others -we see - either way	2007-08-10 00:00:00 Poet Blue-rose


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