Wanting : Erotic Poetry Writing by a Poet out of Baltimore Maryl


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written by Poet : Janet Blaha

Wanting

Warm breeze

Caressing the skin

Gentle touch

Passion begins

Temptation rises

Hearts beating fast

Savoring the moment

Wanting it to last

Sultry kisses

Trembling hands

Bodies entwined

Urgent demands

Rapid breathing

Simmering down

Clinging tight

Not a whispered sound

Spent emotions

Chained and tied

Begging for release

A tear I cry

Originally Posted On Site: 2007-03-14 23:57:58
Last Login: 05.22.08

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Comments:

	SO talented! Your talent is obvious with your work and I would love to do a joint write with you...Descriptive with feelings....If only I could add that to the books Im writing..	2007-03-22 00:00:00 Poet Jeff

	FANTABULOUS! There you go again! Someone has been making you happy, haha	2007-04-18 00:00:00 Poet Shelly

	nice flow the words and images flow along well, like thoughts and emotions and sensations. well done.	2007-04-25 00:00:00 Poet William

	Very visual	2007-05-29 00:00:00 Poet Feralpen

	oops! Meant 'Very visual' as the comment headline. Don't see the edit button, so I'll give a second try. You poem 'Wanting' is very visual. Your style and structure give the write a quick pace which is good because the reader cannot wait to get to the next line. This is a real treat, erotically stimulating and well penned. Great job!	2007-05-29 00:00:00 Poet Feralpen