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The old house : Formal Poetry

written by Poet : cavirzanee


Windows broken, now in disrepair. Paint pealing. No one seems to care. The foundation is still strong. Built to last for years. Were the builders wrong? If they saw her now would they shed a tear?

I think they would fix her up, fix her broken panes Strip off the old paint, Cover her in stain.For under all the peeling paint her cedar siding shown thru. When she's fixed up, she again will be new.

Originally Posted On Site: 2010-01-06 09:55:33
Last Login: 01.30.12


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