Garden of the Mind : Adult Poetry Writing by a Poet out of West Virginia West Virginia

written by Poet : cavirzanee

In who's mind, do the wasted spaces of time intrude? In what light is darkness seen? Who am I? That I should conclude? What sparks of thought now mean?

In the garden of the mind. Who knows what will grow? In search of truth, you can't find. No one really knows. Still inside my heart to meet. Within is love with every beat.

How unto the end of days? The septic truth within each page. All but words, yet to who, understanding? All was heard. Her constant lips demanding.

Originally Posted On Site: 2009-01-02 09:11:58
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Comments:

	i think you lost me here a bit I don't know who she is if its a secret garden of the mind, who is the garden ??? and to be honest since I am writing about the mind recently I am wondering why you are grabbing that headline without- - any explination of who- what garden you are in. WHO IS SHE? I like what you wrote but you lost me! sorry-- you know I rarely comment but since you grabed my mind words since my hard work in on the mind and then you put the secret garden of the mind==I couldn't help but notice-but there isn't a garden here- and who's garden are you digging in here?	2009-01-02 01:00:00 Poet Blue-rose

	Trama, The mind Garden of the mind was written about a state of mind. A lost place where all memery is gone. After my mothers surgery. She had a brain anuerism. Still waiting for her to talk, or tell us if she knows us. As it seems she doesn't.or can't speak to us. Anyway that's where the poem came from.	2009-01-02 01:00:00 Poet Cavirzanee

	:( I feel your pain & my mom passed away of brain cancer:( she did not recognize me at all thru the whole 3 months of it, but somehow looking in her eyes, I think deep down, a part of her knew I was there... Many hugs..	2009-01-04 01:00:00 Poet Passionate65


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