My son the critic! : Inspirational Poetry

My son the Critic

My son is my best and worst- critic

I appreciate my son’s critiques

They are honest!

I know my son, has my best- interest,

in his heart.

There is no one who is a greater living testimonial.

of my life, better- than “my own son.”

And there is no one who - understands it more.

He has seen me go through a life time of pain-

learning from the ups and downs of figuring out,

-trying to learn- how to reach others.

Seen me suffer the agonies of defeat

And the glorious victory’s of Victory!

While, my son is really book smart-

From sending him to college.

I am life smart, I am the faith of my son!

Just as all mothers are.

While at times his thoughtful helpful hints

with my work, do sting!

I listen to my son!

I think them out and try to find the balance,

between his analytical thinking,

and my spiritual revelations.

You see, my son is as your sons.

Growing up in a world, they have

All our son’s and daughters have seen:

The good whom love and serve.

Don’t always get the rewards, credit-

For good deeds done, in this world.

I feel if I can reach my children- by listening

Then I will know

How to reach your sons, your daughters.

This is why -

It’s the most stinging blinking fun-

To spar the great mind on my son.

I love  you Beau- thanks for keeping me balanced in the real world.

You’re the twinkle in my eye

My worst and best loving critic.

Written Christmas 2008 12-26 9:15pm