Unforgiven : Dark Poetry Writing by a Poet out of Other PA

written by Poet : The_Girl_Anachronism

Unable to be redeemed of
Your cruel and selfish ways
Your standing in the shadows
With a lost and empty gaze
Standing there all by yourself
Tears falling from your eyes
Trapped beneath these sins
With no one to hear your cries
You wonder why your all alone
And why you've reached this fate
When you've pushed away the ones
Who care now all that's left is hate
Complaining you've done nothing
Wrong and this is all a big mistake
Reality begins to blur
And everything looks fake
Your knees collapse, You tremble,
Shake, fall and hit the floor
Repeating that your sorry
But no one listens anymore

-Star

Originally Posted On Site: 2007-12-06 06:28:40
Last Login: 01.30.08

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Comments:

	So true	2008-01-02 00:00:00 Poet Theresa

	Me too! I can relate to this poem well. I like your style of writing.	2008-01-22 00:00:00 Poet Saltbg4k

	:) I like this poem I definately can relate	2008-02-03 00:00:00 Poet Nymphette_81

	wtf is the internet well i was young and by that time it was pretty much a way of life, no less recognised as a toaster or refrigerator. but it makes me think of the idiot who also criticised those, its sad that all people weren't born with a reasonable amount of intelligence, so sad	2008-03-10 00:00:00 Poet Complete-threw-incompletion

	from The Gadfly Welcome to the frustration of adulthood. There are never enough dollars to measure true worth.	2008-06-06 00:00:00 Poet Thegadfly4u


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