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The Critique : Inspirational Poetry

written by Poet : Jeff Pelsang


He sits in front of his computer judging other peoples art,

Thinking he knows poetry this young bucks not to smart,

To put down an old mans work who has been writing many years and many days,

Only shows the old man an immature poet whose emotions lack the rays,

The rays that shine down on other people and their creations,

The rays that give writers the energy to write without hessitation,

Its better to shine on a writer and lead him down the positive trail,

To show a writer his or her work matters and in art there is no fail,

Just the fact they take the time to put words down on paper, or share them on the internet where they soon vanish off as its viewing starts to taper,

Hu Rahh for the poet for the fact that they put their thoughts to words,

Hu Rahh for the poet, for ignoring those who are truly absurd...

Keep writing young and old poets, your work is you, its your emotions and thoughts to be judged by you and not some fool,

Originally Posted On Site: 2006-08-06 01:09:54
Last Login: 05.05.12


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