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Rage : Dark Poetry

written by Poet : Jeff Pelsang


Red, fired up, filled with fury,

Outrage, intense, ready to destroy anyone in his path,

Not a word spoken, not a breathe heard, quieted was someone who had laughed,

For John had seen a vicious attack on a child by someone  with misdirected passion,

John was ready to lash out like a fully armed, highly focussed assassin,

The old wooden door swung heavy to close, people in their chairs sat still as if they'd froze,

Eyes peered from all directions with a room filled with an unkowing fright,

John slowly walked towards a shadow trying to stay hidden from site,

Without a word John raised his gun and took a cautious aim,

Screams filled the bar and drinks spilled from tables like rain,

The Shadow came fourth from a begging man,

Pleading for his life, begging from his knees with out-reaching hands,

"CLick", the sound of the hammer to an empty chamber,

The criminal sensed relief from his danger,

John stepped forward with venom running through his veins,

Pulled the trigger once again "Bang", in an instant it emptied the shadows brains,

With his work complete and his duty done john laid down his high powered gun,

Tears filled his eyes as he turned to leave, thoughts of the child was all he could see,

Her body which was lying on the ground, her panties pulled down,

The look in her eyes empty and dark, her life changed with a loss of her spark,

Physically and mentally tortured over and over again, he couldnt believe his wife had sold her to a friend,

The power of drugs had removed a mothers love until she was no longer a mom,

Now Johns poor baby girl is forever gone....

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The Lord may ask us to forgive, he may ask us to turn the other cheek, but with a child sexually murdered and left for dead I say "An eye for an eye". This poem is about Shaniya Davis, a 5 year old girl who was sold and then found dead and apparently sexually assaulted.

Mario Andrette McNeill  has been caught on tape as the last one to have her and the possible killer of this poor young girl. Should it be found he is guilty of such an act he must suffer for what he has done..

 

 

 

 

 indignation, irateness, ire, outrage, rage, spleen, wrathfulness

Related Words aggravation, annoyance, exasperation, irritation, vexation; animosity, antagonism, antipathy, bile, bitterness, contempt, enmity, grudge, hostility, rancor; envy, jaundice, jealousy, pique, resentment; malevolence, malice, spite, venom, virulence, vitriol; belligerence, contentiousness, contrariness, disputatiousness, orneriness, pugnacity, querulousness; blowup, flare-up, outburst; dander, dudgeon, huff, pet, rise, ruffle, temper; delirium, heat, passion, warmth

Originally Posted On Site: 2009-11-18 21:01:43
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