Surrender~ : Relationship Poetry Writing by a Poet out of Boston ma

written by Poet : Ocean-Gypsy

Lying like a mystery
within your full moon eyes
i seemed to have forgotten
that windswept lullaby
perhaps i've just grown tired
or surrendered without a choice
lost inside december
the chill blocks out your voice
i stumble in the silence
it's deafening scream of pain
lying within your eyes
i believe it's going to rain

Originally Posted On Site: 2008-01-07 12:04:25
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Comments:

	nice I think its beautiful	2008-01-07 00:00:00 Poet Teeteebear

	Wow This poem leaves me wondering and is very thought provoking. Is her once loved lover become a grief she can't escape? From this poem a picture was painted in my mind of someone who not only has fallen out of love but is having to live her pain each and every day. The picture of her as she lies in my mind being hovered over by a person she loathes leaves her wondering where the Flowers Grow. Excellent Thought Provoking Poem!	2008-02-02 00:00:00 Poet Jeff


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