Love Prisoners : Love Writing by a Poet out of Albany Denmark, Scandinavia

written by Poet : EC

He held her tight sealing her lips with a cobra kiss
"Let me breathe," she whispered in vain
once again he kissed her passionately
"Let me speak," she thought, unable to talk
His arms snaked around her waist
"Ohhhh ...," she moaned, being suffocated

"I love you," he said, "I see that you also love me"
Love? she thought, faint with the lack of air
so this is love, suffocation and muteness?
If that's the case I wonder what hatred is

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Originally Posted On Site: 2011-04-06 03:08:34
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Comments:

	I do wonder... If hatred might be better.	2011-04-06 01:00:00 Poet LadyCassiopea

	;-) ;-)	2011-04-06 01:00:00 Poet LadyCassiopea

	Hello! The point of the poem is that what is CALLED love may very well be the opposite, i.e. hatred. We - and especially women - often tend to accept actions which rightfully should be classified as evil as weird expressions of love. For instance: "He hits me because he loves me so very much."	2011-04-06 01:00:00 Poet EC

	Indeed Some people have a very distorted view of love. I, personally believe love should be full of respect, compassion and gentleness.	2011-04-06 01:00:00 Poet LadyCassiopea

	Hello! Yes, that's the way it SHOULD be, but some people - or some couples - use it as a tool to gain power, influence, etc., etc.. And what's more, if you profess ignorance on this practice I simply don't believe you. One thing is for sure: Many seemingly loving gestures or actions are the exact opposite ...	2011-04-07 01:00:00 Poet EC


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