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Prayers In Waiting Rooms : Christian Poetry

written by Poet : Doctor-Write


It was cold and wet outside and inside a large crowd of people were waiting to see the doctor . There was some talk here and there among mothers who had just left their school children at school .I though getting to the doctors early would be a clever thing to do .

Get in before everyone else I thought but they were there first .No appointment day is not a good day to see the doctor .

I looked at my watch , it was eight forty five and  I had already been there too long . The sound of newspapers and pages of magazines briefly ruffled as they turned over , bringing with them an end or an interlude to another article about life .  An opinion or echo written by some freelance writer who had something to say about something  .

What was the question ?
What is the answer ?

The doctor hadn't arrived yet to greet his patients who sat waiting in his waiting room .The receptionist smiled at every one walked in .

 

The doctor was unaware if the large crowd in his waiting room .

Sweet surrender, the old woman sighed ,

The baby screamed for a feed .
The boys with a sneeze couldn't control himself any longer .

He was joined by the middle aged man with a nagging cough .

 

Where is the lifeguard I was drowning in a sea of sickness .

All I was after was a second opinion .


So what I had could not be disguised or denied .

A broken wrist .

It felt ok but the writer in me wanted out and I had an itch I couldn't scratch .

Like the sneeze that will not come I sat waiting with a large group of people
who had given thoughts of digging their own graves as we waited .


I asked the man beside me with a walking stick ,

"How long has it walked ?"

 

He smiled and said something about missing his breakfast .

What we need now is meals on wheels .

Where are they when you really need them .

I was getting a little anxious .

 

Waiting rooms and walking sticks I thought ., how ironic .

 

The receptionist put on the radio so we all had something to distract us from all the other distractions .  Just in time for the ten o'clock news .

The presenter read a report  about something so important that we all tried to  listen .


Some innocent man killed by a armed man with a machete as he tried to escape the maddening crowd .

Someone's new baby born with HIV in some third world country .

 

The baby in the waiting room began to cry and it was difficult to hear the rest of the ten o'clock news .


Who needs it anyway .

 

Every time the door opened we all hoped it would be the doctor .

An old woman who could barely walk came into the waiting room .

She needed someone to assist her to sit down if there was an empty chair .

I couldn't resist .

 

I stood up and walked over to look outside the window .


The time of waiting allowed me time to reflect on life .

It gave me the ability to redefine my existence with human kind .
There's so much more to being sick that being sick .

 

Some people have no patience and the  glow of life has become all gloom .

Pity for the people who sat looking glum.

Heads hung down in waiting rooms .

Life should not be so sad or sick .

Life is not all fun for the cross eyed and cross legged .

People don't like to be kept waiting .

Dads and lads or babies with dummies .

Mums and sons, with coughs and sneezes .

Men with walking sticks.

What this place needs is  a lift or therapy , I though .

Waiting rooms need something .

A kind reassuring word or maybe even a bit of comic relief .

 

I thought If I don't try to cheer everyone up there will be an argument soon .

The it came to me ,

Talk don't shout and every one will hear .
Don't live with fear .

 

"I wonder when the doctor will arrive to see us ?"

I said .

 

But nobody answered .

Then it came to me .

Waiting rooms need prayer .

 

So I sat there and silently prayed for those who were sick either in mind or body .

Its an understanding I suppose of the suffering in those around us .

 

Then after I prayed for those around me I focused on the world outside and prayed for the sick people all over the world .

 

That made me feel better and also more aware of how many people in the world who were sick . Then I started to feel sorry for doctors who had their hands full .

So I forgave the doctor for being late and started to pray for doctors .

Then I thought about doctors who got sick and prayed for the doctors doctor .

 

 

The door opened and the healer walked in .

It was the doctor .

He smiled and said good morning .

Everyone answered .

I wanted to grab him by the hand and tell him how much I felt for him in carrying out his life's vocation .

I wanted to tell him I understood and how unjust life was making him have work long hours without getting any appreciation .

I wanted to crawl into his consultation room on my hands and knees .

But when it was my turn to go in I walked in and took a seat beside his large desk and said

 " Could  you  check  my wrist doctor . I'm told its broken . "  I  said  .

He wrote me a referral for an x-ray and told me to go there straight away .

I thanked him and did as he asked .

When I got to the x-ray and pathology unit I took a seat in the waiting room .

Sometimes  life can be erratic ,  others  times  ecstatic ,

Is  there  a  cure  for  a  waiting room  fanatic ?

 

The End

 

By Doctor Write

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Originally Posted On Site: 2008-08-07 07:45:15
Last Login: 01.06.09


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