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When A Man Loves A Woman (A review in Poetry0 : Adult Poetry

written by Poet : Annie77s


When A Man Loves A Woman

A review in Poetry

By Annette Starnes

 

In Anguish she watches the images in her mind

As they repeat over and over again

All of the times she has let herself and her family down

By not being able to stop herself from what she has become.

 

Four o'clock in the morning and she says to herself

I can't do this as she takes a big swig out of her vodka bottle

I'll quit tomorrow, as she takes another swallow.

I promise to slow down, to her husband on their vacation.

 

But she knows deep down that tomorrow never comes

And the pictures in her head keep racing ever faster.

 

Of the time she lost her little girl and didn't know where to find her

Or the time she slapped her for not doing what she had already done

Of not being there to say goodnight because the time just got away from her

Or not making breakfast because she was too hung over to get out of bed.

 

Tomorrow I'll be a better Mommy to my little girls who love me

But she knows deep down that tomorrow never comes.

 

She vows in the hospital after one drink waaay too many

That this time tomorrow will come.

And she finally does something she thought she would never need to do

And she puts her life in someone else's hands.

 

For a while she wishes she were drunk.

Then for a while she wished she were dead

And then she wishes she were someone else, anyone else

And always she wishes she was home.

 

But eventually it gets easier to just take it day by day.

Until finally she is home, where it isn't easier but necessary.

Where she has to find a new way to live without the bottle

And for a while without her husband.

 

Ant then finally tomorrow has come, after 184 days.

It's still a hard battle she must wage every day

But her little girls have learned who mommy really is

And she has learned how much love really means in all senses.

Originally Posted On Site: 2009-06-21 13:18:47
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